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My mother 

My mother is a beautiful person. She is not tall but not short, and she has curly hair and brown. Her eyes color are like honey and her color skin color light brown, and she has a beautiful smile. Her weight likes     60 kg.
She is a very kind person. She is very lovely, friendly, patient, and she loves to help people. I love my mom, because she is a good example to me. She loves being in the Mosque, and she loves sing.
 
She is a very good mother. She always takes care of her family. She likes her house to be clean and organized. She a very organized person, and all things in the house are in the right place. She doesn't like messes.
She always has a smile on her face. She is so sweet and lovely and when the family have a problem she always be with us to helps us and to give us all her love.

 Name : Alfesa Insan Dityawan

Class  : 7D

No      : 01 

comment: your descriptive text is good alfesa, I can imagine that your mother is a kind person. By: Ashrie

Name :Amelinda Yasmin (02)

My Sister

I have one sister she is Lisa , She was born in Semarang 17^th April 2002 , Now she is grade 4 Elementary school.She is funny , occasionally she disturbs me but she is also  good.She has long hair , She has oval face , She has big eyes , She has sharp nose , She has small ears .
I like assemble with my family certainly with my sister , my sister likes joke with me , She likes playing badminton with me , She likes pink color , She likes to talk loudly , She use glasss like me , But my sister lives in Salatiga so I only meet with my sister on holiday.

comment: your grammar is good amel, I like your description. By: Bayu

Name : Ananda Nurmalia (03) 

My Mother

My mother is housewife at my home. She was born on 3 June 1974 at Semarang.

She is tall. She has short wavy hair. She is beautiful and fat. She has dark skin. His eyes are black and his nose is flat. She has small lips. His smile is very nice. She is diligent and smart. She has chubby cheeks. His hobby is singing. She wear earrings on the ear. The job is greengrocer at Jangli Permai street, Semarang. She like singing “dangdut” song. That ‘s descriptive from my mother.

I Love My Mother.... J

Thank you.... 

comment: I kike your mother's hobby ananda,he. by: Aulia




Name  :Ashrie Nur G. (05)

My Mother

My mother’s name is Nur Isdina. She was bron on December 20^th 1961 at Cirebon. She is a teacher  Junior High Shcool in Semarang.  Her hobbies is cooking. I like the food she makes.  She has a wavy long black hair.  She is fat but don’t look fat. Her tall is 1.57 m. Her nose is aquiline.  She has a big brown eyes.  Her face is oval. Her has brown skin. She is a diligent and child care mother. 

  comment: your description about your mother is good. by: Brugman

Name : Aulia Nada

Class : VII D/06

My Beloved Siblings

            I’m Nada. I’m a student of 21 Junior High School Semarang. In my family, I’m the elder from four children. So, I have three siblings, two sisters and a brother.

            Lala is my little sister. She is five years younger than me. Now, she is in 3^rd grade of Elementary School. She is thin, cute, and a little bit annoying. She has long straight hair. She is likes to playing piano and riding bicycle.

            The next is Haikal, my little brother. He is thin and not too tall, but not too short. Now he is still in kindergarten. But, next year he will be student in Elementary School. He is smart and funny. He likes to write on the notes. He usually brings notes everywhere.

            My last sibling is Aluna, she is still baby now. She has short curly hair. On June 2012, she will be two years old. She is very cute and likes to do anything she want. She likes to sing, dance, and imitate other people do. She doesn’t like to cry. She is very talkative.

            They have different characteristics each other. However, I love they all very much :**

  comment: you have much sibling aulia,hehe. by:Dita

My Young Brother

          Dimas is a my young brother. He is youngest child in my family

          He was born in Medan on May 25, 2000. His school in the Kebon Dalem elementary school. He is 1.4 m and 35 kg. He has short straight hair. He has oval face. He has sharp nose. He is shortest. He is black skin. He wear glasses. He is funny boy but sometime he will be freak boy.

          His hobby is played game, and watched TV. He is wise boy but actually wise then me. He also smart student. 

Name : Bayu Novaldi

Class : 7D

Absent Number : 8

comment: I can imagine that your young brother is so cute. your identification is good. by: Lintang  

Name : Brugman Nicoleta Lodewynee(09)

My Brother

My brother My brother name is Brugman William Marcelino. He nick name is ino. He born in Semarang, 6 March 2010. He is two years old. He is big, handsome and cute. He has curly hair, round nose and thick lips. He skin is white, like Caucasians. He is very cute. He can make me and my family laugh. I and my family love him very much.

Name :Dita Aulia Veriska

MY MOTHER

My mother is a tidy woman

She was born on September 13^th 1975. She is now 37 years old. My mother is beautiful, her hair is short and black. My mother is very discipline and smart. She always puts the things on the rights place. Everyday,she always cleans up the house. She also cooks our meals everyday. My mother is a patient people, she seldom angry with me. She is angry when I doing a mistake. My mother can become my best friend. When I lonely,she will be there for me. My mother is the best woman in the world . I Love You My Mother 

comment: your identification and description is good, by: Kiki

 

Name  :Lintang Meydanisa

My Brother

I have a brother, his name is Kanaka. He is sit at grade three Elementary School.

My brother, his nick name is Kana. His hobby is playing game and football. He is not so fat but, people say he is fat, he is nine years old. His face is round and it is make he looks cute but sometimes i’m angry and upset because of him. His skin is not so bright, his skin is dark but not so dark. He is smart in his class. He likes to play with someone who older than he. Just that the description of Kana..thank you.

comment: I like your descriptive. By: melinda


Name :Kiki Mediana 
Class  :7d/13

MY FAMILY

                

 My family has four members, those are I, my sister, and parents of course. We live at Karanganyar street number 31 Banyumanik, Semarang.

                My mother . Her name’s is Mrs.Atik S.sos. She has an oval face. She hair is long and colour is brownish. My mother born in Pemalang, 6^th November 1971.  Her age is 41 years old. I very love my mother, she always gave me support, motivation, and spirit.

                My father. His name’s is Mr.Lilik Priyantoro S.sos. he has oval face. My father born in Jakarta 10^th April 1970. His age is 42 years old. His profession is government employ in the province of Central Java. I very love my father because he always provide for me and my family.

                My sister. Her name’s is Afrida Salsadella. She has ovel face. She hair is long and colour is black. She born in Semarang, 26^th April 2003. She is 9 years old. She school in Banyumanik 02 primary school.

                And the last me, My name is Kiki Meidiana Rosita. I’am school at 21 Junior High School. I born in Pemalang, 18^th 1999. My age is 13^th years old, now I’am is seven grade. In JHS 21 Semarang.

comment: pay attention with your grammar kiki. By: Sharfina

Name :Melinda Widyasti

My Only One Sister

I have a sister , her name is Luky Wudyastuti Puspitaningrum. Just call her Luky. She born on 24 October 1993. Now she is 19 years old. She is tall and slim. She has black short hair. She study in IPDN, Riau. She is kind, nice, diligent, smart, patient, and fanny’s person. Her favorite food is fried rice, and her favorite drink is milk. Her favorite color is red. Her hobby is playing basketball. She usually joins basketball competition and sometime I comes to see her match.  

comment: describe more [lease, by: kinanti

Name :Kinanti Maura Sandradewi

Class  :VII D

My Sister

I have a sister.Her name is Dienti.You can call her Dienti.She was born on August 29,1996.Her nose is sharp.She has a long curly hair.She has slanted eyes,and sweet brown skin.Now,she studying at 3 Senor High School,grade 10.She is not too short but not too tall.She is slim.Her face like indonesia actress,Chelsea Olivia.She is very beauty.I love her so much.

comment: good maura, but you can desribe more. by: syania

Name    : Sharfina Arindriarsya

Class     : VII D (20)

My Brother

My brother is Rafi Akmal, him grade 3 in elementary school.He tall,ugly  (I think),thin, and tolerable smart.He very naughty, and annoying.I always quarrel with him.Almost everyday he scolded by my mother because he’s thin. I hate him, but it’s only temporary because I’m very fond of him. Sometimes he's good, sometimes annoying.I hope my brother be succesful, and can achieve their dreams.

Name    :Syania Oktavia (21)

MY LITTLE BROTHER

I have little brother who is very cute, his name is Rafief Baharrudin. He was born at Semarang on November 7 2001, now he’s in grade 4 of elementary school. He is smart like me, fat but cute, funny, garrulous, jovial, tall, don’t like angry, diligent, clever, when he was hungry he cried. His hobby is eat, swimming, badminton, football, drawing, playing games, chess, listening a music, and etc. He has a black hair, a small and thin lips, a sharp nose, a black eyebrow, a dark brown skin. I very love my little brother although sometimes he naughty with me. I love you.....my little brother....

Name  :Vinata Martadewi (24)

My Mother

I will tell you something about my mother.My mother’s name is Lestari.She was born on 1970, 26^th May.

She is from Semarang.She is tall.She has a short hai.She has a bright skin.She wears a glasses like me.She is a tender woman.For example,when my sister and I are sleeping,she comes into our room,no matter what the hour,and kisses us.She does the same thing every night.My mother helps people wherever they need her.One day, a poor boy come to our home with a big wound on his arm,and my mother cured him.However,when she gets angry.Right now she is living in a small town with my father and me.I love my mother.

comment: good vina, your description is complete. by:Sharfina

Name     :Viola Cahaya Ningrum

Class       :VII D (25)

My Sister

       Her name is Marsha Gresia Mahaidayu. She is studying in 4 Senior High School. She is second grade.

       She is  beutifull. She has straight  and long hair. She has dark skin, but she is not fat and not too thin. She is smart girl, funny and friendly. But she is cool and now she is focuson her hobby. Her hobby is playing guitar. She always help me, so that I’am very loved her.

comment: good viola, by:vina