FORMATIVE TEST

This is only for 7th grade students of SMP N 21 Semarang

hello guys. .
After you got the materials about descriptive text, now your turn to post your descriptive text here. .
GOOD LUCK!!!

The Rules:
a. Each group consist of 2 person
b. Each group has to post 2 descriptive text
c. Each group has their own space.
d. You have to remember in what group you are
e. Do not write anything in the space of other groups.

Group 1

Name : Yusuf Helmy Hensyahputra

My Bedroom , My Favourite Place

          My house is at Graha Estetika Block D/16,my bedroom is in the front left corner at my house.

          In my bedroom there are a bed, clothes cupboard, printer, computer table, and a bookself.My bed is in the left front corner, my bedroom has 2 color, blue and green.The blue color have pooh picture on it, the green one have spongebob picture on it.

          Across my bed there is my my bookself. My bookself have 4 part, the top is for my little brother book  for school, under it there is my book for school, under it there is my tool for school, and the bottom there is my comic.

          Near the door, there is my clothes cupboard.There is 4 part. The first part is the top right, there is my other thing of clothes like my towel, etc... ,the second part is under the first part, there is for hang in my clothes, and the third part is beside of the second part,ther is 3 part,the top for my clothes,the under is my little brother clothes,and the bottom  is for pray tool, the last part is above the third pa

rt, there is for my going clothes.

          Beside of my clothes cupboard there is my computer table,but there isn’t any computer,the top of it there is my printer and my favourite book. In my computer table there is a little cupboard, i place my “ ADB ( Album Donal Bebek ) ” in there.

comment: wow, your writing so complete helmi. you can describe everything.. good job

 Name : Alfesa Insan Dityawan

 Number : 01

Borobudur Temple

Borobudur is Hindu – Budhist temple. It was build in the nineth century under Sailendra dynasty of ancient Mataram kingdom. Borobudur is located in Magelang, Central Java, Indonesia.

Borobudur is well-known all over the world. Its construction is influenced by the Gupta architecture of India. The temple is constructed on a hill 46 m high and consist of eight step like stone terrace. The first five terrace are square and surrounded by walls adorned with Budist sculpture in bas-relief. The upper three are circular. 

Each of them is with a circle of bell shape-stupa. The entire adifice is crowned by a large stupa at the centre at the centre of the top circle. The way to the summit extends through some 4.8 km of passage and starways. The design of borobudur which symbolizes the structure of universe influences temples at Angkor, Cambodia.

Borobudur temple which is rededicated as an Indonesian monument in 1983 is a valuable treasure for Indonesian people.

comment: your descriptive text is good alfesa, you can describe borobudur temple.


Group 3
Name : Viola Cahaya N (25)

My School

        My name is Viola Cahaya Ningrum. I’am studying at 21 JHS Semarang. The located at Karangrejo Raya Street number 12 Banyumanik.

        I love my school. Because it is nice, clean and beautiful. The facilities of my school is complete. Because of it I’am very love it. The teacher’s in 21 JHS is very kind and friendly. I also meet a lot of passionate friend. My school also to be a winner in some competition, for example : PRAMUKA and JURNALISTIC. Because of it I’am very proud of 21 JHS, but someday I hope 21 JHS wil be proud of me.

comment: you should describe our school more completely again,hehe



Name : Vinata Martadewi (24)

My Lovely Bedroom

My bedroom, a small comfortable room, where is I usually stay for a long time in every single my holiday. It has something which are interesting so that I can feel comfort.

First time something that I see when I enter into my room is my bed with purple bed cover. It actually can catch my eyes and lay my body on it. My bed is the best place I can do anything. Besides sleeping, I can read some books, do tasks, listening music,etc.I love this colour. It is purple that makes my room looks girly. A cute small extension table is a one of furniture in my room where I can put a little things such as dolls, clock, and magazine. It’s square and usually I say “the corner table”.My bedroom is really simple but I don’t make it as a matter. I just want to make my room look uncrowded room in order to take a rest my tired body from my activities at college and refresh my mind from any tasks for a while.

comment: i like your descriptive text vina, you can describe good.

Group 5 : Name :Dita Aulia Veriska (11)

                  Name :Sharfina Arindriarsya (20)

-Dita Aulia Veriska : 

                                                                       

My House

My house is my favorite place because my house is clean,neat and attractive.My house paint is blue.My house is storied,in the first floor consist two bedroom,two bathroom,dinning room,living room,kitchen, and the second floor consist one bedroom,one prayer room, and balcony.My house always clean, neat and attractive, that because me and my family always cleaning house twice a week.

comment: you should add your identification dita...

 

-Sharfina Arindriarsya :

My Computer Room

My computer room is my favorite place, because it can use for study, a computer game,sing,dance,etc.I prefer in my computer room than in my bedroom because more heat in my bedroom than in my computer room.My computer room is clean,neat,and cold.In the my computer room also contained a small fish pond,but sometimes I'm too scared in my computer room,although the light.I always cleaning it.

comment: your descriptive text is too short. you can add your descriptive text.

Group 6

Name : Lintang Meydanisa L (15)

 My Bedroom

 My bedroom, is my favourite place. It just a simple place but it so important for me.

My bedroom is small, the colour of my bedroom is green and orange but my father will change it become cream and teracota. My bedroom is so comfortable, i can do anything and no body know what i do. My bedroom is my private place, i always try to make my bedroom clean and comfortable. It is a windows in my bedroom so i can look around to my garage. And sun light can enter to my room, i think my bedroom is the perfect place for me.

comment: i think you can add your identification,he
 

Group 7

-   Name : Aulia Nada (06)

My Garden, My Favourite Place

                I have a favourite place in my house. It is my small garden in front of my house.
                I think my garden is a good habitat for many organisms.  Many trees, flowers, and other plants there. Not only plants, there are many small animals. Such as butterflies, grasshoppers, ants, and many more. Although my garden is not spacious, I like to spend my time there with my sisters. Sometimes, I watering plants in my garden. In the past, I have pair of rabbit. They like to playing with me in garden. They are very cute. But, not long after I bought it at market, they are died. My favourite activity to do in my garden is chase grasshoppers and playing swing, with my sisters and my neighbors. I always feel restfull there. Its why I like my garden so much.

comment: i like your description....






-   Name : Maria Magdalena Tri Nugraheni Paskathantri (16)

My Favourite Place

                I have a favourite place in my home , it is bed room .
In my bed room , I can sleeping , reading , singing , dancing , crying , watching television , and more . Oh yeah , my bed room is the best place to GALAU .
                Everyone has their morning routine, but do we ever really take the time to notice the little things ? After stressful days at school , I like to lose myself in my own private hideaway . My bedroom is the last thing I see before I fall asleep every night and the first thing I catch sight of when I awaken . There is something special about the seclusion of a bedroom . Of all places , this is the one setting that is completely your own . It exudes independence , personality , and style of the occupant . A distorted top forty hit blared through my faithful alarm’s tiny speaker . I pounded the snooze bar with the precision of an elephant stepping on a mouse . Warm rays of the blinding sun peeked through my crooked venetian blinds suggesting the start of a new day . I wiped away the grit of a good nights sleep from my eyes , and saw the dim numbers of the clock taunting me . I stretched my heavy arms and legs , nearly reaching the four posts of my queen size bed . As I wearily crawled out of my warm comforter , my cold feet searched for the familiar white fuzzy rug resting atop my bedroom floor .
comment: your description is long and complete i think...


GROUP 8
Name : Kinanti Maura Sandradewi(14)

My Bedroom, My Best Castle

My bedroom is my favorite place, because it's very comfort. The wall colour is green. It is located at second floor, far from my parent's bedroom. So, I can do anything, free. It has 2 matters, 1 cupboard, 1 AC, and 1 study desk. It's very clean. at my study desk, there are deodorant, powder, stationary, etc. At my bed, there are some dolls, like Pince (My Pink Minnie Mouse), Trinil (My Baby Minnie Mouse), and Eza (My Handsome Dog). and there is a TV , so I can watch TV at my bedroom. I love my bedroom so much :)

comment: your descriptive is good, but it will be better if you add the description,,,
 

Name : Melinda Widyasti Dewi (17)

My Lovely Bedroom

My  bedroom is my favorite place . The walls are pink colour,and there is my family picture hanging on the wall . In my room there are a double bed ,2 closets,a desk,a chair , book desk , and a fan . In my closets there are clothes,shocks,and important document . I like my bedroom are neat,clean,and fragrant . I usually at my bedroom when sleep ,take a nap,study,and spend my free time. I always clean my bedroom everyday. I love my bedroom when it is clean and neat .   

comment: too short melinda,,,,he

 Group 12

Name: Ananda Nurmalia K.N

No. 3

My Favorite Place

My favorite place is bedroom. My bedroom is a beautiful room in my house. It is located near with the living room. My bedroom is the room to keep dolls. It has pink wall, green windows, brown door, and white floor.

It able my some toys like toy cars, barbies, and marbles. And it able stationary like desk for study, pencil case, and books. It also able is cupboard for save clothes. I like my bedroom because the room make enjoy.

I VERRY HAPPY IF IN BEDROOM.... <3 :)

comment: your descriptive text is simple,hehe

Syania Oktavia 7D/21

Group 4

My Beautiful House 

 

  I want to describe about my favorite place, my favorite place is my house. My house is located not so far from my school and near with mosque. My house is not too large, the area just 360 meter square,in my house have many room that is 4 bedroom, 3 bathroom, a living room, a kitchen, and etc. It have a cream wall and floor, a yellow gorden, a dark brown door, and a gate. My house is a beautiful, neat, clean, and spacious. I always enjoy live in my house with my family, I feel my house is my beautiful place in the world. I very love my house.
comment: good sist,

Group 11:   

 Jihan Syahidah 7D/12

Movie Theater

   My favorite place is movie theater. I like go to the movie theater because my hobby is watching films. I can saw the movies in my home but, i prefer watch films in movie theater. I like watch films in movie theater because, movie theater has the big screen, there are 3 dimension, that place is comfortable, there are comfortable red chairs and on right side available drink place and food place. There are so much pictures and there are to be written "no smoking". In movie theater so much delicious popcorn seller. I usually buy a popcorn before watch the films. My favorite film is Never Say Never and The Hunger Games. The tickets price is between 35,000 until 50,000. I usually watch films with my family and friends. I like watch films on holidays. So, I hope on my next holidays I can go to the movie theater with my family or with my friends.
comment: i also like the movie theater,,,,,

Group 11:

 Ashrie Nur Ghaisani W. 7D/5

                                              

                                                 My Favorite Place

My favorite place is the Gramedia in Pandanaran. Place consists of two floors, first floor to store school supplies, music, etc., and the second floor to the bookstore. I love the most is the book store. I liked it because of wide, clean, comfortable, his books neat and complete. his prices are a bit expensive but I think the price was right for that good books. I usually do not go there just to buy but also can ride read. I usually go there with my family after receiving test results report. every time I go there I feel enjoy if I  were here.
comment: you like reading? me too,,,

                                                                                                                                  

 

Group 2 :

Name: Amelinda Yasmin N (2)

                Sania Rahma F (19)

              Thassya Permata A (22)

♥ Sania Rahma F

Mirota Batik
Shop

My favourite place is Mirota Batik Shop, cause over there are very amazing, they have an uniquely.
Theres a shop who you can find in Yogyakarta. They have a lot of design. and you can find anything over there. And you can shop and many things over there. Mirota batik is a souvenir shop of
Yogyakarta, Mirota batik is amazing, That place have three floor, On
the first floor you can find anything about Batik. and the second you
can find many souvenir to take away. and if you very tired, you can
resting on third floor, so many food, drink, and a place to rest.
comment:good descriptive,,
 

♥Thassya Permata Arindra

My Bathroom

My bathroom is my favourite place because i feel enjoy when i in my bathroom. I feel so confident. I can sing, dance, craze, acting, excited, express my anger etc. I think i am a bathroom singer. I think my bathroom is clean haha. But sometimes my bathroom so horrific. Sometimes there are terrible like there is a strange animal haha but its a funny events. I like my bathroom. Oke just it :)

comment: too simple i think,,

Group 4 : Devy Kurnia Sari   (10)                                                                                                              

-Devy Kurnia Sari :

My Room

My room is my favorite place because my room is the most convenient place. I think. my room also save a    lot of stuff I need for example: mattresses, desks, cabinets, appliances make up, etc..

In addition there is a bedroom with too many dolls. my favorite doll is stuffed brown owl, because I love owls and I also love the color brown. spare me the opportunity to use it to wash my stuffed owl that.