POST TEST

My mother 

My mother is a beautiful person. She is not tall but not short, and she has curly hair and brown. Her eyes color are like honey and her color skin color light brown, and she has a beautiful smile. Her weight likes     60 kg.
She is a very kind person. She is very lovely, friendly, patient, and she loves to help people. I love my mom, because she is a good example to me. She loves being in the Mosque, and she loves sing.
 
She is a very good mother. She always takes care of her family. She likes her house to be clean and organized. She a very organized person, and all things in the house are in the right place. She doesn't like messes.
She always has a smile on her face. She is so sweet and lovely and when the family have a problem she always be with us to helps us and to give us all her love.

 Name : Alfesa Insan Dityawan

Class  : 7D

No      : 01 

comment: your descriptive text is good alfesa, I can imagine that your mother is a kind person. By: Ashrie

Name :Amelinda Yasmin (02)

My Sister

I have one sister she is Lisa , She was born in Semarang 17^th April 2002 , Now she is grade 4 Elementary school.She is funny , occasionally she disturbs me but she is also  good.She has long hair , She has oval face , She has big eyes , She has sharp nose , She has small ears .
I like assemble with my family certainly with my sister , my sister likes joke with me , She likes playing badminton with me , She likes pink color , She likes to talk loudly , She use glasss like me , But my sister lives in Salatiga so I only meet with my sister on holiday.

comment: your grammar is good amel, I like your description. By: Bayu

Name : Ananda Nurmalia (03) 

My Mother

My mother is housewife at my home. She was born on 3 June 1974 at Semarang.

She is tall. She has short wavy hair. She is beautiful and fat. She has dark skin. His eyes are black and his nose is flat. She has small lips. His smile is very nice. She is diligent and smart. She has chubby cheeks. His hobby is singing. She wear earrings on the ear. The job is greengrocer at Jangli Permai street, Semarang. She like singing “dangdut” song. That ‘s descriptive from my mother.

I Love My Mother.... J

Thank you.... 

comment: I kike your mother's hobby ananda,he. by: Aulia




Name  :Ashrie Nur G. (05)

My Mother

My mother’s name is Nur Isdina. She was bron on December 20^th 1961 at Cirebon. She is a teacher  Junior High Shcool in Semarang.  Her hobbies is cooking. I like the food she makes.  She has a wavy long black hair.  She is fat but don’t look fat. Her tall is 1.57 m. Her nose is aquiline.  She has a big brown eyes.  Her face is oval. Her has brown skin. She is a diligent and child care mother. 

  comment: your description about your mother is good. by: Brugman

Name : Aulia Nada

Class : VII D/06

My Beloved Siblings

            I’m Nada. I’m a student of 21 Junior High School Semarang. In my family, I’m the elder from four children. So, I have three siblings, two sisters and a brother.

            Lala is my little sister. She is five years younger than me. Now, she is in 3^rd grade of Elementary School. She is thin, cute, and a little bit annoying. She has long straight hair. She is likes to playing piano and riding bicycle.

            The next is Haikal, my little brother. He is thin and not too tall, but not too short. Now he is still in kindergarten. But, next year he will be student in Elementary School. He is smart and funny. He likes to write on the notes. He usually brings notes everywhere.

            My last sibling is Aluna, she is still baby now. She has short curly hair. On June 2012, she will be two years old. She is very cute and likes to do anything she want. She likes to sing, dance, and imitate other people do. She doesn’t like to cry. She is very talkative.

            They have different characteristics each other. However, I love they all very much :**

  comment: you have much sibling aulia,hehe. by:Dita

My Young Brother

          Dimas is a my young brother. He is youngest child in my family

          He was born in Medan on May 25, 2000. His school in the Kebon Dalem elementary school. He is 1.4 m and 35 kg. He has short straight hair. He has oval face. He has sharp nose. He is shortest. He is black skin. He wear glasses. He is funny boy but sometime he will be freak boy.

          His hobby is played game, and watched TV. He is wise boy but actually wise then me. He also smart student. 

Name : Bayu Novaldi

Class : 7D

Absent Number : 8

comment: I can imagine that your young brother is so cute. your identification is good. by: Lintang  

Name : Brugman Nicoleta Lodewynee(09)

My Brother

My brother My brother name is Brugman William Marcelino. He nick name is ino. He born in Semarang, 6 March 2010. He is two years old. He is big, handsome and cute. He has curly hair, round nose and thick lips. He skin is white, like Caucasians. He is very cute. He can make me and my family laugh. I and my family love him very much.

Name :Dita Aulia Veriska

MY MOTHER

My mother is a tidy woman

She was born on September 13^th 1975. She is now 37 years old. My mother is beautiful, her hair is short and black. My mother is very discipline and smart. She always puts the things on the rights place. Everyday,she always cleans up the house. She also cooks our meals everyday. My mother is a patient people, she seldom angry with me. She is angry when I doing a mistake. My mother can become my best friend. When I lonely,she will be there for me. My mother is the best woman in the world . I Love You My Mother 

comment: your identification and description is good, by: Kiki

 

Name  :Lintang Meydanisa

My Brother

I have a brother, his name is Kanaka. He is sit at grade three Elementary School.

My brother, his nick name is Kana. His hobby is playing game and football. He is not so fat but, people say he is fat, he is nine years old. His face is round and it is make he looks cute but sometimes i’m angry and upset because of him. His skin is not so bright, his skin is dark but not so dark. He is smart in his class. He likes to play with someone who older than he. Just that the description of Kana..thank you.

comment: I like your descriptive. By: melinda


Name :Kiki Mediana 
Class  :7d/13

MY FAMILY

                

 My family has four members, those are I, my sister, and parents of course. We live at Karanganyar street number 31 Banyumanik, Semarang.

                My mother . Her name’s is Mrs.Atik S.sos. She has an oval face. She hair is long and colour is brownish. My mother born in Pemalang, 6^th November 1971.  Her age is 41 years old. I very love my mother, she always gave me support, motivation, and spirit.

                My father. His name’s is Mr.Lilik Priyantoro S.sos. he has oval face. My father born in Jakarta 10^th April 1970. His age is 42 years old. His profession is government employ in the province of Central Java. I very love my father because he always provide for me and my family.

                My sister. Her name’s is Afrida Salsadella. She has ovel face. She hair is long and colour is black. She born in Semarang, 26^th April 2003. She is 9 years old. She school in Banyumanik 02 primary school.

                And the last me, My name is Kiki Meidiana Rosita. I’am school at 21 Junior High School. I born in Pemalang, 18^th 1999. My age is 13^th years old, now I’am is seven grade. In JHS 21 Semarang.

comment: pay attention with your grammar kiki. By: Sharfina

Name :Melinda Widyasti

My Only One Sister

I have a sister , her name is Luky Wudyastuti Puspitaningrum. Just call her Luky. She born on 24 October 1993. Now she is 19 years old. She is tall and slim. She has black short hair. She study in IPDN, Riau. She is kind, nice, diligent, smart, patient, and fanny’s person. Her favorite food is fried rice, and her favorite drink is milk. Her favorite color is red. Her hobby is playing basketball. She usually joins basketball competition and sometime I comes to see her match.  

comment: describe more [lease, by: kinanti

Name :Kinanti Maura Sandradewi

Class  :VII D

My Sister

I have a sister.Her name is Dienti.You can call her Dienti.She was born on August 29,1996.Her nose is sharp.She has a long curly hair.She has slanted eyes,and sweet brown skin.Now,she studying at 3 Senor High School,grade 10.She is not too short but not too tall.She is slim.Her face like indonesia actress,Chelsea Olivia.She is very beauty.I love her so much.

comment: good maura, but you can desribe more. by: syania

Name    : Sharfina Arindriarsya

Class     : VII D (20)

My Brother

My brother is Rafi Akmal, him grade 3 in elementary school.He tall,ugly  (I think),thin, and tolerable smart.He very naughty, and annoying.I always quarrel with him.Almost everyday he scolded by my mother because he’s thin. I hate him, but it’s only temporary because I’m very fond of him. Sometimes he's good, sometimes annoying.I hope my brother be succesful, and can achieve their dreams.

Name    :Syania Oktavia (21)

MY LITTLE BROTHER

I have little brother who is very cute, his name is Rafief Baharrudin. He was born at Semarang on November 7 2001, now he’s in grade 4 of elementary school. He is smart like me, fat but cute, funny, garrulous, jovial, tall, don’t like angry, diligent, clever, when he was hungry he cried. His hobby is eat, swimming, badminton, football, drawing, playing games, chess, listening a music, and etc. He has a black hair, a small and thin lips, a sharp nose, a black eyebrow, a dark brown skin. I very love my little brother although sometimes he naughty with me. I love you.....my little brother....

Name  :Vinata Martadewi (24)

My Mother

I will tell you something about my mother.My mother’s name is Lestari.She was born on 1970, 26^th May.

She is from Semarang.She is tall.She has a short hai.She has a bright skin.She wears a glasses like me.She is a tender woman.For example,when my sister and I are sleeping,she comes into our room,no matter what the hour,and kisses us.She does the same thing every night.My mother helps people wherever they need her.One day, a poor boy come to our home with a big wound on his arm,and my mother cured him.However,when she gets angry.Right now she is living in a small town with my father and me.I love my mother.

comment: good vina, your description is complete. by:Sharfina

Name     :Viola Cahaya Ningrum

Class       :VII D (25)

My Sister

       Her name is Marsha Gresia Mahaidayu. She is studying in 4 Senior High School. She is second grade.

       She is  beutifull. She has straight  and long hair. She has dark skin, but she is not fat and not too thin. She is smart girl, funny and friendly. But she is cool and now she is focuson her hobby. Her hobby is playing guitar. She always help me, so that I’am very loved her.

comment: good viola, by:vina

PREPOSITION

Hello. . .

in leaning descriptive text, don't forget to study about preposition. .

compare at, on, and in:

• They arrived at 5 o'clock.
• They arrived on Friday.
• They arrived in October. / They arrived in 1999.

we use:

at  for the time of day:

at 5 o'clock, at 11.45, at midnight, at lunchtime, at sunset

on for days and dates:

on Friday, on 12 March 1991, on Christmas day, on my birthday

in for longer periods ( for example, months, years, seasons):

in October, in 1999, in the 18th century, in the past

in the winter, in the 1970, in the Middle Age, in the future

we use at in these expressions:

• at night
• at the weekend/ at weekend
• at Christmas (but on Christmas day)
• at the moment / at present
• at the same time

 look at these examples!!

I'll see you in the morning.

Do you work in the evening?

I'll see you on Friday morning.

Do you usually go out on Saturday evening? 

I was born on 12 March 1980 at Semarang.

Dani was born at West Java on June 1990.

FORMATIVE TEST

This is only for 7th grade students of SMP N 21 Semarang

hello guys. .
After you got the materials about descriptive text, now your turn to post your descriptive text here. .
GOOD LUCK!!!

The Rules:
a. Each group consist of 2 person
b. Each group has to post 2 descriptive text
c. Each group has their own space.
d. You have to remember in what group you are
e. Do not write anything in the space of other groups.

Group 1

Name : Yusuf Helmy Hensyahputra

My Bedroom , My Favourite Place

          My house is at Graha Estetika Block D/16,my bedroom is in the front left corner at my house.

          In my bedroom there are a bed, clothes cupboard, printer, computer table, and a bookself.My bed is in the left front corner, my bedroom has 2 color, blue and green.The blue color have pooh picture on it, the green one have spongebob picture on it.

          Across my bed there is my my bookself. My bookself have 4 part, the top is for my little brother book  for school, under it there is my book for school, under it there is my tool for school, and the bottom there is my comic.

          Near the door, there is my clothes cupboard.There is 4 part. The first part is the top right, there is my other thing of clothes like my towel, etc... ,the second part is under the first part, there is for hang in my clothes, and the third part is beside of the second part,ther is 3 part,the top for my clothes,the under is my little brother clothes,and the bottom  is for pray tool, the last part is above the third pa

rt, there is for my going clothes.

          Beside of my clothes cupboard there is my computer table,but there isn’t any computer,the top of it there is my printer and my favourite book. In my computer table there is a little cupboard, i place my “ ADB ( Album Donal Bebek ) ” in there.

comment: wow, your writing so complete helmi. you can describe everything.. good job

 Name : Alfesa Insan Dityawan

 Number : 01

Borobudur Temple

Borobudur is Hindu – Budhist temple. It was build in the nineth century under Sailendra dynasty of ancient Mataram kingdom. Borobudur is located in Magelang, Central Java, Indonesia.

Borobudur is well-known all over the world. Its construction is influenced by the Gupta architecture of India. The temple is constructed on a hill 46 m high and consist of eight step like stone terrace. The first five terrace are square and surrounded by walls adorned with Budist sculpture in bas-relief. The upper three are circular. 

Each of them is with a circle of bell shape-stupa. The entire adifice is crowned by a large stupa at the centre at the centre of the top circle. The way to the summit extends through some 4.8 km of passage and starways. The design of borobudur which symbolizes the structure of universe influences temples at Angkor, Cambodia.

Borobudur temple which is rededicated as an Indonesian monument in 1983 is a valuable treasure for Indonesian people.

comment: your descriptive text is good alfesa, you can describe borobudur temple.


Group 3
Name : Viola Cahaya N (25)

My School

        My name is Viola Cahaya Ningrum. I’am studying at 21 JHS Semarang. The located at Karangrejo Raya Street number 12 Banyumanik.

        I love my school. Because it is nice, clean and beautiful. The facilities of my school is complete. Because of it I’am very love it. The teacher’s in 21 JHS is very kind and friendly. I also meet a lot of passionate friend. My school also to be a winner in some competition, for example : PRAMUKA and JURNALISTIC. Because of it I’am very proud of 21 JHS, but someday I hope 21 JHS wil be proud of me.

comment: you should describe our school more completely again,hehe



Name : Vinata Martadewi (24)

My Lovely Bedroom

My bedroom, a small comfortable room, where is I usually stay for a long time in every single my holiday. It has something which are interesting so that I can feel comfort.

First time something that I see when I enter into my room is my bed with purple bed cover. It actually can catch my eyes and lay my body on it. My bed is the best place I can do anything. Besides sleeping, I can read some books, do tasks, listening music,etc.I love this colour. It is purple that makes my room looks girly. A cute small extension table is a one of furniture in my room where I can put a little things such as dolls, clock, and magazine. It’s square and usually I say “the corner table”.My bedroom is really simple but I don’t make it as a matter. I just want to make my room look uncrowded room in order to take a rest my tired body from my activities at college and refresh my mind from any tasks for a while.

comment: i like your descriptive text vina, you can describe good.

Group 5 : Name :Dita Aulia Veriska (11)

                  Name :Sharfina Arindriarsya (20)

-Dita Aulia Veriska : 

                                                                       

My House

My house is my favorite place because my house is clean,neat and attractive.My house paint is blue.My house is storied,in the first floor consist two bedroom,two bathroom,dinning room,living room,kitchen, and the second floor consist one bedroom,one prayer room, and balcony.My house always clean, neat and attractive, that because me and my family always cleaning house twice a week.

comment: you should add your identification dita...

 

-Sharfina Arindriarsya :

My Computer Room

My computer room is my favorite place, because it can use for study, a computer game,sing,dance,etc.I prefer in my computer room than in my bedroom because more heat in my bedroom than in my computer room.My computer room is clean,neat,and cold.In the my computer room also contained a small fish pond,but sometimes I'm too scared in my computer room,although the light.I always cleaning it.

comment: your descriptive text is too short. you can add your descriptive text.

Group 6

Name : Lintang Meydanisa L (15)

 My Bedroom

 My bedroom, is my favourite place. It just a simple place but it so important for me.

My bedroom is small, the colour of my bedroom is green and orange but my father will change it become cream and teracota. My bedroom is so comfortable, i can do anything and no body know what i do. My bedroom is my private place, i always try to make my bedroom clean and comfortable. It is a windows in my bedroom so i can look around to my garage. And sun light can enter to my room, i think my bedroom is the perfect place for me.

comment: i think you can add your identification,he
 

Group 7

-   Name : Aulia Nada (06)

My Garden, My Favourite Place

                I have a favourite place in my house. It is my small garden in front of my house.
                I think my garden is a good habitat for many organisms.  Many trees, flowers, and other plants there. Not only plants, there are many small animals. Such as butterflies, grasshoppers, ants, and many more. Although my garden is not spacious, I like to spend my time there with my sisters. Sometimes, I watering plants in my garden. In the past, I have pair of rabbit. They like to playing with me in garden. They are very cute. But, not long after I bought it at market, they are died. My favourite activity to do in my garden is chase grasshoppers and playing swing, with my sisters and my neighbors. I always feel restfull there. Its why I like my garden so much.

comment: i like your description....






-   Name : Maria Magdalena Tri Nugraheni Paskathantri (16)

My Favourite Place

                I have a favourite place in my home , it is bed room .
In my bed room , I can sleeping , reading , singing , dancing , crying , watching television , and more . Oh yeah , my bed room is the best place to GALAU .
                Everyone has their morning routine, but do we ever really take the time to notice the little things ? After stressful days at school , I like to lose myself in my own private hideaway . My bedroom is the last thing I see before I fall asleep every night and the first thing I catch sight of when I awaken . There is something special about the seclusion of a bedroom . Of all places , this is the one setting that is completely your own . It exudes independence , personality , and style of the occupant . A distorted top forty hit blared through my faithful alarm’s tiny speaker . I pounded the snooze bar with the precision of an elephant stepping on a mouse . Warm rays of the blinding sun peeked through my crooked venetian blinds suggesting the start of a new day . I wiped away the grit of a good nights sleep from my eyes , and saw the dim numbers of the clock taunting me . I stretched my heavy arms and legs , nearly reaching the four posts of my queen size bed . As I wearily crawled out of my warm comforter , my cold feet searched for the familiar white fuzzy rug resting atop my bedroom floor .
comment: your description is long and complete i think...


GROUP 8
Name : Kinanti Maura Sandradewi(14)

My Bedroom, My Best Castle

My bedroom is my favorite place, because it's very comfort. The wall colour is green. It is located at second floor, far from my parent's bedroom. So, I can do anything, free. It has 2 matters, 1 cupboard, 1 AC, and 1 study desk. It's very clean. at my study desk, there are deodorant, powder, stationary, etc. At my bed, there are some dolls, like Pince (My Pink Minnie Mouse), Trinil (My Baby Minnie Mouse), and Eza (My Handsome Dog). and there is a TV , so I can watch TV at my bedroom. I love my bedroom so much :)

comment: your descriptive is good, but it will be better if you add the description,,,
 

Name : Melinda Widyasti Dewi (17)

My Lovely Bedroom

My  bedroom is my favorite place . The walls are pink colour,and there is my family picture hanging on the wall . In my room there are a double bed ,2 closets,a desk,a chair , book desk , and a fan . In my closets there are clothes,shocks,and important document . I like my bedroom are neat,clean,and fragrant . I usually at my bedroom when sleep ,take a nap,study,and spend my free time. I always clean my bedroom everyday. I love my bedroom when it is clean and neat .   

comment: too short melinda,,,,he

 Group 12

Name: Ananda Nurmalia K.N

No. 3

My Favorite Place

My favorite place is bedroom. My bedroom is a beautiful room in my house. It is located near with the living room. My bedroom is the room to keep dolls. It has pink wall, green windows, brown door, and white floor.

It able my some toys like toy cars, barbies, and marbles. And it able stationary like desk for study, pencil case, and books. It also able is cupboard for save clothes. I like my bedroom because the room make enjoy.

I VERRY HAPPY IF IN BEDROOM.... <3 :)

comment: your descriptive text is simple,hehe

Syania Oktavia 7D/21

Group 4

My Beautiful House 

 

  I want to describe about my favorite place, my favorite place is my house. My house is located not so far from my school and near with mosque. My house is not too large, the area just 360 meter square,in my house have many room that is 4 bedroom, 3 bathroom, a living room, a kitchen, and etc. It have a cream wall and floor, a yellow gorden, a dark brown door, and a gate. My house is a beautiful, neat, clean, and spacious. I always enjoy live in my house with my family, I feel my house is my beautiful place in the world. I very love my house.
comment: good sist,

Group 11:   

 Jihan Syahidah 7D/12

Movie Theater

   My favorite place is movie theater. I like go to the movie theater because my hobby is watching films. I can saw the movies in my home but, i prefer watch films in movie theater. I like watch films in movie theater because, movie theater has the big screen, there are 3 dimension, that place is comfortable, there are comfortable red chairs and on right side available drink place and food place. There are so much pictures and there are to be written "no smoking". In movie theater so much delicious popcorn seller. I usually buy a popcorn before watch the films. My favorite film is Never Say Never and The Hunger Games. The tickets price is between 35,000 until 50,000. I usually watch films with my family and friends. I like watch films on holidays. So, I hope on my next holidays I can go to the movie theater with my family or with my friends.
comment: i also like the movie theater,,,,,

Group 11:

 Ashrie Nur Ghaisani W. 7D/5

                                              

                                                 My Favorite Place

My favorite place is the Gramedia in Pandanaran. Place consists of two floors, first floor to store school supplies, music, etc., and the second floor to the bookstore. I love the most is the book store. I liked it because of wide, clean, comfortable, his books neat and complete. his prices are a bit expensive but I think the price was right for that good books. I usually do not go there just to buy but also can ride read. I usually go there with my family after receiving test results report. every time I go there I feel enjoy if I  were here.
comment: you like reading? me too,,,

                                                                                                                                  

 

Group 2 :

Name: Amelinda Yasmin N (2)

                Sania Rahma F (19)

              Thassya Permata A (22)

♥ Sania Rahma F

Mirota Batik
Shop

My favourite place is Mirota Batik Shop, cause over there are very amazing, they have an uniquely.
Theres a shop who you can find in Yogyakarta. They have a lot of design. and you can find anything over there. And you can shop and many things over there. Mirota batik is a souvenir shop of
Yogyakarta, Mirota batik is amazing, That place have three floor, On
the first floor you can find anything about Batik. and the second you
can find many souvenir to take away. and if you very tired, you can
resting on third floor, so many food, drink, and a place to rest.
comment:good descriptive,,
 

♥Thassya Permata Arindra

My Bathroom

My bathroom is my favourite place because i feel enjoy when i in my bathroom. I feel so confident. I can sing, dance, craze, acting, excited, express my anger etc. I think i am a bathroom singer. I think my bathroom is clean haha. But sometimes my bathroom so horrific. Sometimes there are terrible like there is a strange animal haha but its a funny events. I like my bathroom. Oke just it :)

comment: too simple i think,,

Group 4 : Devy Kurnia Sari   (10)                                                                                                              

-Devy Kurnia Sari :

My Room

My room is my favorite place because my room is the most convenient place. I think. my room also save a    lot of stuff I need for example: mattresses, desks, cabinets, appliances make up, etc..

In addition there is a bedroom with too many dolls. my favorite doll is stuffed brown owl, because I love owls and I also love the color brown. spare me the opportunity to use it to wash my stuffed owl that.